Kia ora Gabriella, What a beautiful collage! Your work is well- balanced and uses appropriate autumn colours and images. I like the inclusion of the squirrel representing that many animals in the world eat and store food in autumn in preparation for winter.
Hey Gabriella I'm Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School , it is really cool but you could just make your writing a bit bigger and mack it bold so then it is easier to read . But other than that it is a really good blogpost ka pie Gabriella.
Hi Gabriella. I'm Renae, from Yaldhurst Model School. This is a good blog. Here are a few tips to make your next blog great: Add an intro, say what a Autumn collage is,ask some questions and say bye. Great job. Bye. From Renae
Kia ora Gabriella, What a beautiful collage! Your work is well- balanced and uses appropriate autumn colours and images. I like the inclusion of the squirrel representing that many animals in the world eat and store food in autumn in preparation for winter.
ReplyDeleteHey Gabriella
ReplyDeleteI'm Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School , it is really cool but you could just make your writing a bit bigger and mack it bold so then it is easier to read . But other than that it is a really good blogpost ka pie Gabriella.
Kind Regards -
Delilah Yr 6
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Hi Gabriella.
ReplyDeleteI'm Renae, from Yaldhurst Model School.
This is a good blog.
Here are a few tips to make your next blog great: Add an intro, say what a Autumn collage is,ask some questions and say bye.
Great job.
Bye.
From Renae
Hi Renae,
DeleteThank you for your advice I will definitely do that in the future.
-Gabby.